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那難忘的背影寫這樣可以嗎.....
Aug 1st 2013, 14:08

如題....
作文題目是"那難忘的背影"
那時我不知哪根筋打結了....
於是我用了"地球"作為寫作方向
那時只是想到地球的背影....也就是"夜晚"~
所以我就寫了沉浸在夜裡那不同於白天的悠閒
而有了更深不同的體會~
而進一步變成了難以抹滅的記憶
如果光看取材方向而不看文筆
請問這樣能被接受嗎??

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